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Sometimes it's fun to see where something begins.  My novels almost always begin with a character, a specific character, in a specific situation.  My job as the writer is to build concentric rings of story and universe around the character until his or her story is a cohesive whole.

Like the inner workings of a sausage factory, first drafts aren't always pretty, but it's where we all start out.
Future Tense  ~  Unnamed Medical Thriller  ~   Backburner Ideas
Future Tense (In revisions):

(YA Urban Fantasy/Magical Realism)

In the ten years since his parents died in a fire he predicted but couldn't prevent, seventeen year old Matt is trying to stay out of trouble, biding his time until he ages out of foster care. All he wants is for the world to leave him alone so he won't be tortured by seeing someone's future he's powerless to change anyway. But his plans for keeping himself aloof fail when he interrupts a vicious attack on Amara, a girl from his school. Despite his best attempts to push her away, he can't ignore the connection they've formed. That's when glimpses of her dangerous future start to invade the present — a future he fears he is responsible for. Now Matt has something to lose again . . . and something to fight for.

    Another day without getting punched, stabbed, or shot.  I guess I could call it a win.  Grabbing my backpack, I waded into the mob leaving P.S. 20, a high school so beaten down nobody bothered to give it a name. Like most of the district schools, and I had been in them all, it was mostly crumbling bricks, cinder blocks, gangs, and drugs with some classrooms. If nothing screwed up my placement this time, I’d graduate from here.

    "Matt!" 

     It was Chico and I ignored him. A tenth grader Mr. and Mrs. Powell took in six weeks ago. An "emergency" placement.
 
    "Yo, Garrison, wait up!"

    I kept walking, past the school and the empty lot that was supposed to be a playground. A few budding trees and some new weeds were the only signs winter was over, if you didn’t count a fresh crop of beer cans, broken nips bottles, and syringes.

    "Come on, man."

    We're never told why a kid is in foster care, but it's not hard to figure out. The lucky ones had parents who only tried to ignore them to death. Some kids got hurt so bad they disappeared into a black hole. Others stole your stuff and split in the middle of the night. Then there are the few true orphans like me. And Chico?  He was what we called a lifer. His dad disappeared before he was born and his mom bounced around between jail and drug treatment, but she refused to give up her 'parental' rights. Not that kids as old as Chico and me were even adoptable at this point.

    "We’re going to the same place, man," Chico said.

    Like that made a difference to him. Most afternoons, Chico disappeared after school and showed up reeking of body spray just before Mrs. Powell got home from her shift at the nursing home. If he was heading back now, it was only because he ran out of money for pot. Well, he would have to hustle to catch up. The Powells counted on me to be there to meet the elementary school bus. Mr. Powell worked afternoons at a local locksmith shop and there was a gap of about a half hour or so before Mrs. Powell got home. Watching the kids earned me extra computer time, so I didn't mind too much.

    "Hey, where's the fire?" Chico asked.

    I whipped around so fast, he just about slammed into me. I knew he didn't know, couldn't know what he was saying, but it didn't stop the nightmare images. My throat felt tight and raw.  I couldn't swallow. The memory of ashes coated my tongue. Chico stared at me, his eyes so wide the whites showed all around the brown.

    He stepped back and put his hands in front of him. "We chill, hombre, right?"   

    I unhunched my shoulders. That fire was long gone and it had been a while since some stupid remark made me relive it all again. "You talk too damn much," I said, slowing my breathing down and shoving away images of smoke and death.

    Chico shook his head. I waited, not saying a word until he walked away from me. My hands were curled into tight fists. I forced them to relax. Mostly, it wasn't Chico I was mad at, but maybe he would leave me alone now. Picking up the pace, I crossed the street, dodging taxis and jogged past the Korean grocery on 39th Avenue. 40th was just a whole block of pawn shops and check cashing places. The men and women filing in and out of the armored storefronts looked as beat up as I felt. 

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Unnamed medical thriller:

An ER doctor gets accidentally exposed to a bacteria genetically engineered to effect mitochondria and give soldiers an energy boost during crisis in wartime. The only problem: the bacteria has adapted to the antibiotic vulnerability the scientists thought they had programmed in. And it's spreading, causing a near epidemic of what looks like leukemia in some patients, sickle cell crisis in others.


    Nights in the ER I can roll up my sleeves and get to work.  Literally.  And at least now, with the sun setting by 4:30, I actually have a life outside of the graveyard shift. Most of the rest of the New Englanders around me are doing their annual battle with seasonal affective disorder, but this is my favorite time of the year.  The sooner it gets dark, the happier I am.
  
     I've lived my whole life avoiding sunlight.  I'm not really a vampire and I won't explode in a cloud of dust as the sun rises.  What I face is more like a death by slow torture.  My first melanoma was removed when I was six.  
    
    My girlfriend does a complete skin check on me every  month. It's not so bad, actually.  Michelle loves me, XP and all and she doesn't let me feel sorry for myself.  The last skin check involved a blindfold--for me, not for her--and was a lot more fun then when my dermatologist examines me.  
      
    It was nearly five am and the ER was finally quiet.  Michelle would be gone by the time I was through with this shift, but our off-kilter schedules mostly worked.  She got to maintain a normal daytime life, I was the scourge of the ER from midnight to seven, and we had the third shift to take care of us.
    
    Shift change was coming soon and barring any last minute crises, I might be able to get home on time. I finished dictating the notes from the last wave of gunshots and stab wounds, tossed my sunglasses next to the computer monitor, and rubbed my bleary eyes.  
    
    "So you're human like the rest of us."
    
    I looked up and smiled.  The night nurse manager dropped into the chair next to me.  
    
    "Sorry to disappoint you," I said.
    
    Bernie looked me over, her deep brown eyes hound dog worried, but her voice was its usual take-no-prisoners drill Sargent.  "You're not getting enough sleep, Count Dracula."
    
    She was the only person who called me that to my face.   "Well, my coffin's at the dry cleaners," I said, leaning back in the chair.  I was tired.  This was my fifth extra shift this month, but my loans weren't paying themselves and Michelle and I were hoping to buy a condo. Just call me Greg Dalton, ER whore. 

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The 2 story ideas below are simmering on the back burner.

The Forgetting: In a world in which spoken language preserves history and sets the course of the future, Unegen, a powerful mage, begins to lose his mastery over words. Epic fantasy set in a nomadic culture.


Unnamed YA/urban fantasy: A young girl researching her roots for a school genealogy assignment discovers her own adoption papers. But even family secrets and lies are not what they seem and searching for her 'real' parents sends her into a past she's never studied in a history book.

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